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I think I finally cracked the code!
May 11, 2019
8:41 am
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Hey John! This was something I had planned on talking about in yesterday's coaching call, but something came up and I didn't quite make it. This might be a bit of a long post - sorry in advance! 

I was re-watching the copywriting course again (for like the 10th time - there's always something new I learn!) and I think something from that finally clicked with something you'd said previously about the Facebook algorithm. For a long time I've been confused how the fan avatar concept comes in to play when we're just targeting based on interests, and I think I understand now. 

Previously I've used very technical descriptions of my music in squeeze page headlines. Stuff like "Soaring vocals, cinematic orchestrations, and some of the best guitar work to ever hit the symphonic metal scene." It works, don't get me wrong, but I think I finally realized how to connect on a more emotional level. I changed my headline to "With crushing riffs, blazing solos, mournful orchestrations and the voice of a Siren, Mute Prophet is the soundtrack to a moonlit night and a turbulent sea." Calling out to pre-existing interests and passions, like you do with your "pour yourself a whiskey" line. 

I'm running this squeeze page to three audiences - fans of a specific band that's been known to use similar language, all fans of symphonic metal, and a lookalike of everyone who's hit my purchase confirmation page in 180 days in the US. Now here's the thing I may have realized about the algorithm. The first audience, the fans of the specific band, the ones I KNOW will respond to this language, are responding to that as the ad text by far the best, and converting on the squeeze page at almost 50%. The lookalike audience and the broader genre targeting are responding instead to a different ad text that's less emotional and more technical, and they're converting at a much lower rate (though still perfectly affordable).

What I'm starting to see in my testing, though, is that the people from those broader audiences who DO end up converting on this new headline on MUCH better matched to my narrative and more emotionally receptive to my funnel than I've previously seen from those same audiences when I was using my old headline.

So I guess what I'm wondering is, does presentation via the headline call out the fan avatar from an otherwise-broad audience as the algorithm narrows down the tier that will convert? That certainly feels like what I'm starting to see. 

May 14, 2019
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Hey Kevin,

Sorry about missing your question on the coaching call. I refreshed my questions one final time as soon as I had disconnected and the question was there. 

To be honest, I don't totally understand what you mean by "does presentation via the headline call out the fan avatar from an otherwise-broad audience as the algorithm narrows down the tier that will convert?"

But my general response to what you've aid up is that I think your approach is great and your observations are likely valid. 

It's definitely all about emotion. The more emotion you can convey, the better you will do.

In terms of the trend you are seeing, it's hard to ever come to any definitive conclusion about what is actually happening, only in the sense that you can often do the same exact thing on another day and get different results. This is because it's always a combination of copy, and the track the algorithm gets going on with a new campaign.

It may be that the more technical headline works better with a colder audience, it may just be that the ad worked out this way, this time.

I sort of just put my best foot forward and then let the numbers guide me. But after a while, you certainly do get a sense of what works and what doesn't for an audience, which it sounds like you are.

Clarify a bit more on that sentence I didn't follow and maybe I can offer more explanation.

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