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6:47 pm
November 15, 2017
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QuoteHey John-
Happy New Year! I have an initial draft of a squeeze page I'd love to run by you. My page is not active so i can't send a link. Attaching 2 screenshots which should do the trick. Open to any and all feedback.
Thanks!
Matt
7:16 pm
June 7, 2011
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Happy New Year Matt,
It looks pretty good to me. It's all about the target audience. For me, your squeeze page headline conjures up imagery of a defiant, misunderstood emo teen who retreats from the world by listening to music in his/her poster clad bedroom. But possibly in a slightly retro way. Meaning, it may appeal to adults who were that teen more than people that are actually teens now. If that fits with what you are going for I think it's a great first swing. You never really know until you start testing.
But I think it's looking good.
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3:27 pm
November 15, 2017
OfflineCool. Interesting take. Yeah, I suppose there is something of the (formerly) misunderstood teen in there. The music is not Emo in the genre sense, but it is thematically in that ballpark.
I'm going to go with this as a starting point and see where it takes me.
Thanks!!
Matt
11:51 pm
June 7, 2011
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Sounds good Matt. Let us know how you do. You gotta start somewhere. This is as good of a place as any 🙂
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