hey guys
Would love to get your feedback on my squeeze page please
And this squeeze page is for a particular campaign
http://www.seggedanmusic.com/django/
Cheers
Segs
Hey Segge,
They both look pretty good. The thing I like about the Django one is that it speaks to a very specific audience, assuming you will be targeting people who saw the movie.
The broader one is also good. The headline might be a bit light on really making me understand what kind of music it is. But it's not bad at all. All you can do is test and see what kind of numbers you get. If something comes up short then it's easier to start looking for flaws.
Great start.
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Thanks John
Yes will be targeting people who saw the movie. Does Facebook had features that you let know the movies that people like?
Ahh I see you what you mean regarding the broader one, I think it's more my reluctance to label myself alternative Hip Hop which could be anything from Jazz Fusion to Trip Hop! Mine is more of a soulful Hip Hop fused with different genres with inspirational messages. Ideally, I would say its Hip Hop fusion but that term is not really used
Do you think this sounds more definite in terms of understanding what the music is:
...a concoction of soulful Hip Hop and World Music flavours ... or
...Hip Hop mixed with Soul, Fusion and World Music
Cheers
Segs
Hey Segge,
To target a movie I would just add the movie title to your detailed targeting field. I'd be surprised if Django unchained wasn't there.
I think "Hip Hop mixed with Soul, Fusion and World Music" is perhaps a bit clearer. But it might not have as nice of a ring to it compared to what you have. Either one would be worth testing.
Cheers.
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makes me want to hear it!
I was going to say the same thing...there is a strong sense of demand because there is no free audio. Makes you want to hear it!
Now I feel bad for providing so many free links to music everywhere in the past...oh well...the learning continues!!