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January 10, 2017
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hey guys

 

Would love to get your feedback on my squeeze page please

http://www.seggedanmusic.com/

 

And this squeeze page is for a particular campaign

http://www.seggedanmusic.com/django/

 

Cheers

Segs

January 10, 2017
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Hey Segge,

They both look pretty good. The thing I like about the Django one is that it speaks to a very specific audience, assuming you will be targeting people who saw the movie.

The broader one is also good. The headline might be a bit light on really making me understand what kind of music it is. But it's not bad at all. All you can do is test and see what kind of numbers you get. If something comes up short then it's easier to start looking for flaws.

Great start.

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January 11, 2017
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Thanks John

Yes will be targeting people who saw the movie. Does Facebook had features that you let know the movies that people like?

 

Ahh I see you what you mean regarding the broader one, I think it's more my reluctance to label myself alternative Hip Hop which could be anything from Jazz Fusion to Trip Hop!  Mine is more of a soulful Hip Hop fused with different genres with inspirational messages.  Ideally, I would say its Hip Hop fusion but that term is not really used

Do you think this sounds more definite in terms of understanding what the music is:

  ...a concoction of soulful Hip Hop and World Music flavours ... or

...Hip Hop mixed with Soul, Fusion and World Music

 

Cheers

 

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January 12, 2017
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Hey Segge,

To target a movie I would just add the movie title to your detailed targeting field. I'd be surprised if Django unchained wasn't there.

I think "Hip Hop mixed with Soul, Fusion and World Music" is perhaps a bit clearer. But it might not have as nice of a ring to it compared to what you have. Either one would be worth testing.

Cheers.

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August 28, 2017
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makes me want to hear it!Laugh

August 30, 2017
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I was going to say the same thing...there is a strong sense of demand because there is no free audio. Makes you want to hear it!

Now I feel bad for providing so many free links to music everywhere in the past...oh well...the learning continues!!Smile

September 1, 2017
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Ace, thanks Pele and  Aaron - glad it's creating a demand!

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