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QuoteOk, I'm getting such a low, low conversion rate on my squeeze page that I forced myself to come up with a new design. I plan to change my focus and my offering either once a month or once every two months. My first one would focus on the double CD of flamenco cante (singing) that I've released in Europe and will soon release in the U.S.. Here's my photo, which would stay constant.
For the first offering, I plan this as a headline:
I talked a great flamenco singer
[underneath, I'd add] into recording this great double album.
Opinion? Feedback?
10:42 am
June 7, 2011
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Hey Eve,
I hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism but I think that needs some work. That doesn't really do anything to provoke my curiosity or engage my sense of desire at all. I'd really try to tap into the experience that a flemenco music lover is ultimately craving and come up with a sentence that suggests that whatever you have to share will deliver on that experience.
Hope that helps.
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