Hey Ron,

A few thoughts:

#1 - the most important thing on the page is the headline and this one is too wordy and unclear:

Your soundtrack to breaking free from the demands of modern life, as if you just kept on driving past your street and into some new, unknown horizon…

Maybe something like this?

"Hit play, Lay back in your seat and let the impossible demands of modern life fade away as Widetrack takes you on a journey to a new, unknown horizon..."

Or, depending on who you're targeting, maybe even something like this:

"Lay back in your seat, Crack open an ice-cold beer, and let the bulls*** fade away as Widetrack takes you on a journey to a new, unknown horizon..."

One way to think about it would be to envision the most impactful way to hear your recorded music and then describe it using emotional words in the language that your prospects would use.

Talking about the 'demands of modern life' can be a good angle to contrast with the experience of your music, but the language itself isn't impactful. The 'impossible demands of modern life' sounds more frustrating, so it makes your music sound better by contrast.

#2 - I'd try and get a better image in there. I like the bow/guitar thing, but something that looked more pro without the crazy colors might perform better.

#3 - I'd consider changing the order of the quotes. I like the 3rd one best and the 1st one least. Words like 'mature listener' and 'solid musicianship' aren't very exciting and could easily come off as anticlimactic after a good headline.

#4 - The form fields and labels should be darker so they pop more and the form should be wider to better fit the sidebar.

Hope that helps!