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QuoteI have attached the text of my beginning of my squeeze page idea.. Any opinions and suggestions greatly appreciated.
Wanting to make some traction with a nonprofit non paying gig produced last year and going on again this year.
Want to connect with the patrons this year with this enticing video.
Thanks,
Jazz-elle
10:20 pm
June 7, 2011
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Hi Jazelle, please just take this as honest feedback. I really hate to be negative, but after reading that I have no idea what you;re offering. So i think it needs some work. Maybe tell us more about what you're doing and we can all shoot some ideas at you for a headline. I assume this is headline copy you're working on?
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Thanks John for honest feedback. That is the only kind I prefer. I can't see my attached text so not sure
if you saw that. I want to get emails from the facebook page of this fun Valentines Day event that will go up soon.
There is an 8 day performance of several erotic acts... I was one last year and have an enticing video of our performance.
I would like to post it on the page telling people this is a kind of performance they will get if they attend the fundraiser.... but
the squeeze page will force them to give mailing address first...
This would be a good experiment... i wonder how many people will trust and go for it.
the squeeze page begins:
“What Is Erotic?" an Exclusive 'Touch Me' video by JaZz-Elle, from 418 project fundraiser of 2012, three girlfriends dancing together.
"Touch Me" with three 'hotties' dancing for you...
Sizzle till you smoke... with this "Touch Me" Exclusive
- Check out the colorful corsets...
- The sexy fishnet stockings...
- The high boots....
- The thumping dance beats and the girls' moves...
- Get your groove on and/or your !!!!! on....
Sign up with your email and you will have access to this sizzler 4+ minute video.
Enjoy this titillating film of "Touch Me" performed live at the "What Is Erotic" fundraiser of 2012. Sign up now as this is only offered during this Valentines Day time period - when we in our culture place extra effort towards sizzling love and eroticism; a special Happy Valentines Day gift to you.
Sincerely,
JaZz-Elle
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What do you think?
10:13 pm
June 7, 2011
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I see, I still think the headline is a bit confusing. Its hard to make suggestions though without seeing the video.
Perhaps a headline and subheadline something more like...
"Get a FREE copy of the Erotic Dance Video "Touch Me" featuring Jazz-Elle and her Three Sexy Girlfriends..."
Warning: This video is not suitable for some audiences 
That's just a quick suggestion. I'm sure it could be improved. It's difficult without knowing whats in teh actual video. Anyone else have any suggestions?
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Thanks a lot for your input. Makes more sense. Now dealing with one of the girls not wanting her image on this video out on Facebook. Wasn't able to get a talent release form signed before performance.
I have not been able to adequately get the private selection to work on youtube and just have it shown only to those with the link. EIther it isn't private, or those with the link somehow are not able to access it when it is set. On your Viral Music Toolkit video, are you using a private youtube url for this selection.. So people are not able to see that video when they go to your youtube site? How did you do that?
12:49 am
June 7, 2011
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Yes, a private video link is a way to do it. You can also self host the video if you're really worried about it.
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From today's coaching call I found out that it is very easy to hack into a youtube account and get the share link...
Because my dancer is worried about her kids seeing it, I almost have to call it quits.. With privately hosting the video you
mean like with the easy video platform that costs about $300, which wouldn't work on my budget at this time?
Or is there another way? Really appreciated your coaching call today. Awesome to speak with you directly.
and receive a lot of insight with the others
questions.
10:08 pm
June 7, 2011
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Great to have you on the call and speak with you as well. There are actually many ways to do it. Easy Video Player makes it simple, but it is expensive as you mentioned.
One way you could do it is host the video on your own server (hosting account), or even something like Amazon S3. Amazon s3 is very confusing to set up, but once set up it's very easy. And it's extremely cheap. Then you could use a free video player like one of these: http://www.instantshift.com/20.....and-blogs/
A note of caution though... Any media can be shared very easily. With youtube someone only needs to share the private link. With a self hosted video anyone can rip the video in a variety of ways and share it that way. Hell, it seems like all of those illegally distributed sex tapes out there were stolen from people's homes, not hacked or illegally shared. So you're never really protected.
I think if your friend is really concerned about it getting out there then its best to never release the video. With that said, I don't personally worry about illegal sharing. It's rarely an issue with music or videos from indie artists. But totally your call and I would probably error on teh side of caution.
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