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QuoteI would like opinions on my Squeeze Page for the Holidays to add traffic for
my newest single release "Love and Peace". Gotta get this thing rolling by the
end of this week~
Blessings to all of us hard working musicians in every capacity,
Jazzelle
OK so I am winding down this week with a couple glasses of wine and forgot to add my
link to my squeeze page from my last post. Here is my squeeze page for the
holidays of my latest single "Love and Peace". All opinions welcome.
http://www.jazzellemusic.com/freesong/
Blessings to us all,
JaZzElle
11:35 pm
June 7, 2011
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Hey Jazelle,
It's not bad. I still think the headline could pull me into an experience that I will get as a result of interacting with you and your music. Right now it speaks to the hustle and bustle of the holidays, which is a great job and addressing the dialogue that may be taking place in your visitors mind, but I don't know that it entices me personally. But I could be wrong. All you can do is test it and see.
But you focus a lot in your copy on "peace". You may want to make that connection with the classic holiday sentiment of "peace". Just a thought.
Also, if you are going for a holiday thing, you might try holiday colors. And of course, the web form is missing as of now.
Hope that helps.
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