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8:58 pm
August 25, 2021
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QuoteHi John
You reviewed my squeeze page on the Coaching sesh last week. I took your feedback on board and made changes based on your suggestions.
Do you think it is better now? Here is the link:
http://www.chocolaterocketship.com
Also, do you think the most successful (clicked) image on my FB ad campaign should be the squeeze page photo?
Thank you Adam
2:20 pm
June 7, 2011
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Hey Adam, I'm fuzzy on what it was originally but I think it's better. Leading with the word compositional is a bit wordy/intellectual. You might just try something like "The quirky music and melodies of".
And yes, typically I swap out the image on the squeeze page with the image that does best in my initial round of ads.
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