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QuoteHere is what I have now at the top-
Order your copy of “SALVATION” now because as renowned Jazz Guitarist Steve Herberman put it, “Their compositions are melodic with interesting twists and turns to keep the listener engaged”…
But do you think this quote would be better?
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"The Adam Wines Group is a solid band with a swinging rhythm section.”
10:54 pm
June 7, 2011
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I personally like the first quote a bit mire, but I don't know that I would personally use it as the main headline on the sales page. Because the headline is your main selling proposition, I don't know that "interesting twists and turns" is enough to pull me in. Know what I mean? But I think it can do well as a supporting quote.
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